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What is a habit that you learned from a family member or friend?

박소은/2024-08-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have a habit that is to go to catholic church, every Sunday. Our family religion is catholic for four generation so, I am a believer from birth. Kelly, there was a power outage at my home 2 days ago. so, my house is out of internet service from then. so, I couldn't access the internet and was forced to miss class today. I gonna fix up quickly and see you on wed. bye~

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Anna!

It's wonderful to hear that your family has such a strong tradition. Faith is really important.

Thanks for letting me know! No worries, I understand. Hope your internet gets fixed soon. See you on Wednesday. Take care!

~Kelly^^

I have a habit that is to go to catholic church, every Sunday.

>> Correct

OR:

>> I have a habit that is to go to catholic church, every Sunday.

Our family religion is catholic for four generation so, I am a believer from birth.
>> Our family has been Catholic for four generations, so I have been a believer since birth.

Kelly, there was a power outage at my home 2 days ago. so, my house is out of internet service from then.

>> Kelly, there was a power outage at my home two days ago, so my house has been without internet service since then.

so, I couldn't access the internet and was forced to miss class today. I gonna fix up quickly and see you on wed.

>> As a result, I couldn't access the internet and was forced to miss class today. I'm going to fix it quickly and see you on Wednesday.

bye~

>> Correct