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Explain the saying "Time is Gold.

현무/2024-07-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think time is more important than money, time is life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kyle! Thank you for sharing your ideas on today’s homework. I hope you keep contributing your thoughts and providing longer answers. Challenge yourself and push your limits from time to time!

~~Teacher Ryka ^^

I think time is more important than money, time is life.
>> I believe time is more valuable than money because time represents life itself.
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