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Explain the saying "Time is Gold."

신봉규/2024-07-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Time is precious. Don't just waste time, do something productive. those times will give good results. so Time is Gold
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Bong Kyu! I'm glad you were able to give some time to do the homework. I know you have a tight schedule but you still took some time to do it anyways. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Time is precious.  
>> CORRECT
OR >> Time is valuable.

Don't just waste time, do something productive. 
>> Don't waste it—use it productively. 

those times will give good results.
>> Doing so will yield good results. 

so Time is Gold
>> Therefore, time is gold.
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