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Have you ever regretted not saying something to someone?

김일환/2024-07-29

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When I was in university. I couldn't a girl who was a classmate that I liked her. At that time, I had no plan for my furture. I didn't know what to do for my furture. I just worked for my Volunteering club. Everybody knew that I like her, she liked me. One friend pushed me to tell it, but I couldn't. Looking back now, it wasn't a proposal. It just was making a girl friend. I regretted it for 10 years. However, it is a good memory now.
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Your writing is getting better, especially your sentence structure and use of connectors. Focus on expanding your vocabulary and varying sentence lengths in your writing.
- Teacher Angela


When I was in university. I couldn't a girl who was a classmate that I liked her. 
>> When I was in university, there was a girl who was a classmate that I liked, but I couldn't tell her.

At that time, I had no plan for my furture.
>> At that time, I had no plan for my future.

 I didn't know what to do for my furture. 
>> I didn't know what to do for my future.

I just worked for my Volunteering club. 
>> I just worked for my volunteering club.

Everybody knew that I like her, she liked me. 
>> Everybody knew that I liked her, and she liked me.

One friend pushed me to tell it, but I couldn't. 
>> One friend encouraged me to tell her, but I couldn't.

Looking back now, it wasn't a proposal. 
>> Looking back now, it wasn't really a proposal.

It just was making a girl friend. 
>> It was just about making a girlfriend.

I regretted it for 10 years. However, it is a good memory now.
>>  I regretted it for 10 years. However, it's a good memory now.
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