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Which country do you think has the best desserts? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-07-28

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I think French because there's Michelin and Europe has a lot of delicious food. Also UK dessert is delicious because there have many colony so have variety of food.
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Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good night and see you again on Wednesday!  


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                          Which country do you think has the best desserts? Explain your answer.


I think French because there's Michelin and Europe has a lot of delicious food.
>> CORRECT~~

Also UK dessert is delicious because there have many colony so have variety of food.
>> Also, British dessert is delicious because there are many colonies so they have a variety of food.

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