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What have you decided to do this school vacation?

차진혁/2024-07-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I will go on a trip to Gyeongju and Busan in summer vacation. I will swim in the beach, and eat Korean big crab and sasimi. And I afraid getting a shot, but I must do that.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from last Friday's homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as "at the beach" or "in the ocean". See you again on Wednesday! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                       What have you decided to do this school vacation?


I will go on a trip to Gyeongju and Busan in summer vacation.
>> I will go on a trip to Gyeongju and Busan on summer vacation.

I will swim in the beach, and eat Korean big crab and sasimi.
>> I will swim at the beach, and eat Korean king crabs and sashimi.
>> or: I will swim in the ocean, and eat Korean king crabs and sashimi.

And I afraid getting a shot, but I must do that.
>> And I'm afraid of getting a shot, but I must do it. 
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