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What’s a new recreational activity you’d like to try, and why?
박소은/2024-07-26
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
my new recreational activity is travelling with my puppy.
whenever I go to hometown, I visit to new place with anni (puppy name:)).
nowhere doesn't matter any place a cafe, a restaurant, a park,a lake..
as long as dogs are allowed^^
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Anna!✨
That sounds like a lot of fun! Exploring new places with Anni must be a great adventure.
~Kelly🌹
my new recreational activity is travelling with my puppy.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I’ve taken up traveling with my puppy as a new recreational activity.
whenever I go to hometown, I visit to new place with anni (puppy name:)).
whenever I go to hometown, I visit to new place with anni (puppy name:)).
>> Whenever I go to my hometown, I visit new places with Anni (my puppy).
nowhere doesn't matter any place a cafe, a restaurant, a park,a lake.. as long as dogs are allowed^^
nowhere doesn't matter any place a cafe, a restaurant, a park,a lake.. as long as dogs are allowed^^
>> It doesn’t matter where - whether it’s a café, restaurant, park, or lake - as long as dogs are allowed.
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