I search Internet as our country's the best weather region , it is Gangneung. Donghae and Sam check in Gangwon-do. It's cool in summer and cold a little than anotther region in winter, the fine dust isn't bad. I want to go to there again.

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                             Which region of your country has the best weather? What is it like there?

I search Internet as our country's the best weather region , it is Gangneung. Donghae and Sam check in Gangwon-do.

>> I searched on the Internet and it says Gangneung, Donghae, and Samcheok in the Gangwon-do region have the best weather in Korea. 

It's cool in summer and cold a little than anotther region in winter, the fine dust isn't bad.

>> It's cool in summer and a little colder than other regions in winter, and the fine dust isn't bad.

I want to go to there again.

>> I want to go there again.