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What things do you first notice about someone's appearance?

송유라/2024-07-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
What I first notice about someone's appearance is clothes. The way how someone wears clothes reflects thier personalities. Even though it is not always accurate, it is the easiest way to know his personality. For example, someone who wears fancy colorful clothes and a lot accessories may like to express his feelings and like to get attentions. He may be a social person. But sometimes my expectation is wrong. So I have to be careful to conclude someone's personality at the first time I meet them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Yura! I agree that clothing can reflect aspects of someone's personality. It can also indicate their mood, cultural background, or social status. Thank you for sharing your valuable insights! Happy Friday! ^^
~T. Jewel
What I first notice about someone's appearance is clothes.
>>What I first notice about someone's appearance is their clothes.
The way how someone wears clothes reflects thier personalities.
>>The way someone wears clothes can reflect their personality.
Even though it is not always accurate, it is the easiest way to know his personality.
>>Although it is not always accurate, it is often the easiest way to get a sense of their personality.
For example, someone who wears fancy colorful clothes and a lot accessories may like to express his feelings and like to get attentions. 
>>For example, someone who wears fancy, colorful clothes and a lot of accessories may like to express their feelings and seek attention.
He may be a social person.
>>They may be a social person.
But sometimes my expectation is wrong. So I have to be careful to conclude someone's personality at the first time I meet them.
>>However, sometimes my initial impressions are wrong, so I have to be cautious about concluding someone's personality upon first meeting them.
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