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김순님/2024-07-25

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Working condition of outside has nothing to do with salaries. It is only related in demand and supply. If no one wants to work at the bad condition,The owner will suggest add money. That is why companys give the 150% salary to workers who work On weekend. I don\\\'t know we should give more money to workers who work under hot temperatures place. Because the standard of hard working is different from each people.
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Good morning, Ms. Sunny!
You have a good point in your answers. People desire fo r a convenient and conducive workplace however, in a real society, not all are granted such privileges. Some people must sacrifice luxury to earn money to feed their families. How grateful are we to these people who provide such services?
Have a good day!
T Aki~

Working condition of outside has nothing to do with salaries.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> The working conditions outside do not affect salaries directly.

It is only related in demand and supply.
>>> They are more related to demand and supply.

If no one wants to work at the bad condition,The owner will suggest add money.
>>>  If no one is willing to work in poor conditions, the employer might offer higher pay.

That is why companys give the 150% salary to workers who work On weekend.
>>> This is why companies often provide 150% of the regular salary to employees who work on weekends.

I don't know we should give more money to workers who work under hot temperatures place.
>>> I am unsure whether we should offer extra pay to workers in hot environments.

Because the standard of hard working is different from each people.
>>> Because the standards for hard work vary among individuals.


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