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What do you think of your sleeping habits?

차진혁/2024-07-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think my sleeping habits is so so because I often wake up late. I usally go to bed at 10 o'clock and get up at between 7 o'clock and 7:30. And I usally watch TV before go to bed. So my sleeping habit is normal.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from Wednesdays' homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below, such as the expression "average" which also means "so-so" . See you this Friday! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                             What do you think of your sleeping habits?


I think my sleeping habits is so so because I often wake up late.
>> I think my sleeping habits are just average because I often wake up late.

I usally go to bed at 10 o'clock and get up at between 7 o'clock and 7:30.
>> I usually go to bed at 10 p.m. and get up between 7 a.m. and 7:30 a.m.

And I usally watch TV before go to bed.
>> And I usually watch TV before going to bed. 

So my sleeping habit is normal.
>> So my sleeping habits are normal. 
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