Yeon Hee, 

Thanks for sharing. You almost got this. Just be mindful of the spelling and the preposition. I know you can do it. ^^

-Teacher Ash

My favorite movie is entitled Guardians of the Galaxy.

>>CORRECT

It was shown in movie theaters on 2014 July.

>>It was shown in movie theaters in July 2014.

I like this movie because of the entertaning story and fancy computer graphics.

>>I like this movie because of the entertaining story and fancy computer graphics.