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류건우/2024-07-24
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Q: When can you say that you are successful?
A: I think I can say I'm successful when I achieved something I wanted to.
I think just for me, achieving something means I've succeeded something and I can get the fulfillment, so I'm successful then.
But I think usually people say they're successful when they've earn a lot.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. I think just for me, achieving something means I've succeeded something and I can get the fulfillment, so I'm successful then.
3. But I think usually people say they're successful when they've earn a lot.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think I can say I'm successful when I achieved something I wanted to.
>>I think I can say that I'm successful when I achieve something I want.
2. I think just for me, achieving something means I've succeeded something and I can get the fulfillment, so I'm successful then.
>>I think just for me, achieving something means I've succeeded on something, and I can get the fulfillment, so I'm successful by then.
3. But I think usually people say they're successful when they've earn a lot.
>>But I think usually people say they're successful when they've earned a lot.
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