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Are you careful when using electricity? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-07-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't touch a plug and a soket with wet hands because if touch with wet hands, get shocked and a plug can breaking down. And I use a plug slowly and carefully when I using electricity. If use electricity must be careful.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello again, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good evening!  


Cheers,
Jean~~





                                              Are you careful when using electricity? Explain your answer.


I don't touch a plug and a soket with wet hands because if touch with wet hands, get shocked and a plug can breaking down.
>> I don't touch a plug and a socket with wet hands because if touch them with wet hands, get shocked and a plug can break down.

And I use a plug slowly and carefully when I using electricity.
>> Also, I use a plug slowly and carefully when I use electricity.

If use electricity must be careful.
>> One must be careful when using electricity. 

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