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What's the typical weather in summer in your country? what are your thoughts on the weather in summ

차진혁/2024-07-23

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It is hot and rainy in summer in my country. And I thought very bad on the weather because appear many mosquitoes.
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Hello, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from Monday's homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. See you soon! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                  What's the typical weather in summer in your country? What are your thoughts on the weather in summer?



It is hot and rainy in summer in my country.
>> CORRECT~~
>> OR: Korea has a hot and rainy summer. 

And I thought very bad on the weather because appear many mosquitoes.
>> And I don't like this weather because many mosquitoes would appear. 

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