A few months ago, The News in Korea announced issues. The owner of stores said that if someone stay in a cafe too long, we have loss sales.
I also agree with their opinion.
I thinks that the clients should have a manner using the stores.
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Here are some corrections:
1. A few months ago, The News in Korea announced issues.
>>A few months ago, The News in Korea announced these issues.
2. The owner of stores said that if someone stay in a cafe too long, we have loss sales.
>>The owners of these stores said that if someone stays in a cafe for too long, they have some loss in sales.
3. I also agree with their opinion.
>>CORRECT!
4. I thinks that the clients should have a manner using the stores.
>>I think that the clients should have manners when using the stores.