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Is the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life?

신봉규/2024-07-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think traditional ways of behavior are still used. I like traditional food such as kimchi and bulgogi
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello Bong Kyu! Thank you for your dedication to your homework! You’ve been doing an excellent job. Keep up the fantastic work!^^ 
~~Teacher Ryka ^^

I think traditional ways of behavior are still used. 
>> I believe traditional ways of behavior are still practiced.

I like traditional food such as kimchi and bulgogi
>> I also enjoy traditional foods like kimchi and bulgogi

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