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How long do you spend looking at one website? Have you ever gotten angry with a website?

박소은/2024-07-22

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I don't know I spend looking at one website but I have ever gotten angry with website. I have ever gotten angry because the website is not opening it was opening late so have angry with website.
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Hi Sunny!

I'm sure you can think of more things to write about the next topic.

Take note of the simple corrections so you won't repeat the same ones.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I don't know I spend looking at one website but I have ever gotten angry with website.
>> I don't know how much I spend looking at one website but I did get angry while looking at this one website.
I have ever gotten angry because the website is not opening it was opening late so have angry with website.
>> I was angry because I couldn't access the website easily. 
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