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류건우/2024-07-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What do you think motivates people to seek out exciting experiences? A: I think usually some stories of other people or books can motivate people. I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story which a person ventured and succeeded. And I think sometimes people get motivated with out any reasons.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to remember:

1. I think usually some stories of other people or books can motivate people.
>>I think some stories of other people or books can usually motivate people.

2. I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story which a person ventured and succeeded.
>>I think most people feel like they also want to venture when they read or heard of a story of a person who ventured and succeeded.

3. And I think sometimes people get motivated with out any reasons.
>>And I think that sometimes people get motivated without any reasons.

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