I don't have favorite food, don't have hate food. But l like good food. I enjoy food time. I think lt's not what you eat, lt's who you eat with. I like to eat good food with good people. Enjoy your food time, you will become healthy.

Hi Eva,

 

Good job on your homework! Thanks for sharing your thoughts about food! You did very well. Here’s a simple guide to help you improve your essay:

Introduction: Start by saying what your essay will be about. For example: "To me, the best part of eating isn’t just the food, but who you eat it with."

Body: Write a few sentences about your ideas. You could say: "I don’t have a favorite food or one I dislike. I enjoy many different kinds of food. What matters most to me is eating with good people. It makes the meal more fun."

Conclusion: Finish by summarizing your main points and adding a final thought. For example: "So, while I don’t have a favorite food, I believe that sharing a meal with great people makes it special."

 

So your essay might look like this:

 

To me, the best part of eating isn’t just the food, but who you eat it with. I don’t have a favorite food or one I dislike. I enjoy many different kinds of food. What matters most to me is eating with good people. It makes the meal more fun. So, while I don’t have a favorite food, I believe that sharing a meal with great people makes it special.

 

You’re doing a great job. I look forward to reading more of your work!

 

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don't have favorite food, don't have hate food.

>>I don't have a favorite food, and I don't have any foods I hate.

But l like good food.

>>CORRECT

OR>>But I do enjoy good food.

I enjoy food time.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I enjoy food time.

I think lt's not what you eat, lt's who you eat with.

>>I think it's not about what you eat, but who you eat with.

I like to eat good food with good people.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I enjoy sharing good food with good people.

Enjoy your food time, you will become healthy.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Enjoy your meals; it will help you stay healthy.