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When do you feel happy the most?

황성은/2024-07-17

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I feel happy when I start eating something delicious. Recently I was happy eating ice cream after finishing my swimming class. I felt hot and hungry and I didn't feel guilty at all because I exercised. It was a perfect moment.
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Hello, Seoung Eun!~
I am glad to know that you found a food that can uplift your mood ^^  Learning small things about yourself can help you a lot, especially when it comes to stress relievers ~
Chammy

I feel happy when I start eating something delicious. 
Recently I was happy eating ice cream after finishing my swimming class.
 I felt hot and hungry and I didn't feel guilty at all because I exercised. It was a perfect moment.
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