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ȸ ÷ֽ ۹Hi Eva,
Good job on your homework!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about food! You did very well. Heres a simple
guide to help you improve your essay:
Introduction: Start by saying what your essay will be about. For example: "To me, the best part of eating isnt just the food, but who you eat it with."
Body: Write a few sentences about your ideas. You could say: "I dont have a favorite food or one I dislike. I enjoy many different kinds of food. What matters most to me is eating with good people. It makes the meal more fun."
Conclusion: Finish by summarizing your main points and adding a final thought. For example: "So, while I dont have a favorite food, I believe that sharing a meal with great people makes it special."
So your essay might look like
this:
To me, the best part of eating isnt just the food, but who you eat it with. I dont have a favorite food or one I dislike. I enjoy many different kinds of food. What matters most to me is eating with good people. It makes the meal more fun. So, while I dont have a favorite food, I believe that sharing a meal with great people makes it special.
Youre doing a great job. I
look forward to reading more of your work!
~Teacher Cathy
I
don't have favorite food, don't have hate food.
>>I
don't have a favorite food, and I don't have any foods I hate.
But l
like good food.
>>CORRECT
OR>>But
I do enjoy good food.
I
enjoy food time.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I
enjoy food time.
I
think lt's not what you eat, lt's who you eat with.
>>I
think it's not about what you eat, but who you eat with.
I like
to eat good food with good people.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I enjoy sharing good food with good people.
Enjoy
your food time, you will become healthy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Enjoy
your meals; it will help you stay healthy.