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류건우/2024-07-17

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Q: When is using emotions a problem? A: I think using emotions would be a problem when people are deciding something serious. I think it would be a problem because usually emotional decisions bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think a bout future too. Also, it might be a problem when their judging about one's punishment.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think using emotions would be a problem when people are deciding something serious.
>>CORRECT!

2. I think it would be a problem because usually emotional decisions bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think a bout future too.
>>I think it would be a problem because emotional decisions usually bring temporary fulfillment, but they should think about the future, too.

3. Also, it might be a problem when their judging about one's punishment.
>>Also, it might be a problem when they're judging about someone's punishment.

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