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If you had time and money, how would you spend your weekend.

차진혁/2024-07-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have time and money I will go on a trip with my family because I like travel. I will visit the landmark and watch TV or sauna in hotel.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Jimmy!

Here's your revised composition from last week's homework. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions given below. Good night! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                  
                                         If you had time and money, how would you spend your weekend?


If I have time and money I will go on a trip with my family because I like travel.
>> If I had time and money, I would go on a trip with my family because I like traveling. 

I will visit the landmark and watch TV or sauna in hotel.
>> I will visit landmarks and watch TV or go to the sauna in the hotel.
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