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What do you think is the best time for a kid to sleep? Explain.

차유진/2024-07-14

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I think the best time for a kid is 9 o'clock because At that time, a lot of growth hormones come out and if sleep late, doesn't grow tall
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Hello, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good one!  


Cheers,
Jean~~




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I think the best time for a kid is 9 o'clock because At that time, a lot of growth hormones come out and if sleep late, doesn't grow tall
>> I think the best time for a kid to sleep is at 9 o'clock because at that time, a lot of growth hormones come out, and if sleep late, I grow tall. 
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