I think that enjoying job is more important than making a lot of money. When I was a child, I learned how to successed. It was that, Today's pain will be tomorrow's glory. It means that I should invest in today for tomorrow, never enjoy today, and make a goal for my furture. If I achieve the goal, I am a success person. However, my life continues even after I achieve the goal. My teacher didn't tell me about life after achieving the goal. I think that now is most important in my life. Living while enjoying my current job is most important in my life.
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- Teacher Angela
I think that enjoying job is more important than making a lot of money.
>> I believe that enjoying your job is more important than earning a lot of money.
When I was a child, I learned how to successed.
>> When I was a child, I learned how to succeed.
It was that, Today's pain will be tomorrow's glory.
>> It was said that today's pain will be tomorrow's glory.
It means that I should invest in today for tomorrow, never enjoy today, and make a goal for my furture.
>> It means that I should invest in today for tomorrow, not just enjoy today, and set goals for my future.
If I achieve the goal, I am a success person.
>> If I achieve the goal, I am a successful person.
However, my life continues even after I achieve the goal.
>> CORRECT
My teacher didn't tell me about life after achieving the goal.
>> CORRECT
I think that now is most important in my life.
>> I think that the present moment is the most important in my life.
Living while enjoying my current job is most important in my life.
>> The most important thing in my life is living while enjoying my current job.