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Q: What is the latest good news you got? A: 1. My maternal grandfather health has improved 2. Acceptance of the working holiday 3. Acquaintance marriage

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Hi, Yeong Min!

Good news has the power to uplift, inspire, and connect people, fostering a more positive and supportive environment.

Have a good day!

T. Aki~

1. My maternal grandfather health has improved.

>>> CORRECT!

2. Acceptance of the working holiday.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >> When my application for the working holiday in Canada has been approved.

3. Acquaintance marriage

>>> CORRECT!

OR >> When I heard about my friend's marriage.