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If you were a song, what song would you be and why?
김명기/2024-07-10
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It is an interesting metaphor. I
f I were a song, I think I would be a hymn.
I spend a lot of time doing God's work.
It seems like a mono, but it is very touching.
It might not be very fun, but it has a strong sense of life.
I would like to have a life that moves forward.
Although the song is not harmonious, it feels like a solo.
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Hi, MK!
It's very nice that even when it comes to the song you can compare yourself to, you still chose a song related to faith. I agree, hymns might sometimes sound plain, but they give peace and a sense of comfort.
- T. Caitlyn
It is an interesting metaphor.
>> CORRECT
If I were a song, I think I would be a hymn.
If I were a song, I think I would be a hymn.
>> CORRECT
I spend a lot of time doing God's work.
I spend a lot of time doing God's work.
>> CORRECT
It seems like a mono, but it is very touching.
It seems like a mono, but it is very touching.
>> It may seem like a monotone, but it is very touching.
It might not be very fun, but it has a strong sense of life.
It might not be very fun, but it has a strong sense of life.
>> CORRECT
I would like to have a life that moves forward.
I would like to have a life that moves forward.
>> CORRECT
Although the song is not harmonious, it feels like a solo.
Although the song is not harmonious, it feels like a solo.
>> CORRECT
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