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Can you describe a piece of music that has a special meaning to you? What emotions does it evoke?

신봉규/2024-07-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I listen to the music that I listened to in middle school, I remember those memories. I really liked listening to songs with my friends
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Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you for taking time from your busy schedule to do the homework. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I listen to the music that I listened to in middle school, I remember those memories. 
>> When I listen to the music from my middle school days, it brings back memories. 

I really liked listening to songs with my friends
>> I really enjoyed listening to songs with my friends.
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