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What do you think of July weather? Are there any bad things about the month of July?

박소은/2024-07-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think there is so much rain in july. No, I don't have a bad thing

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
Never lose hope.
You can definitely get better.
You just need more practice.
Be careful of your spelling.
Always work hard.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I think there is so much rain in july.

>> I think there is so much rain in July.
No, I don't have a bad thing

>> There are no bad things for me in July.