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What's your favorite music video? Do videos help you enjoy the music more?
김명기/2024-07-09
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I tend not to watch music videos. But I have a memorable music video in my life.
It is called "How much I like," but the original title is "Suteki da ne."
The original song is Japanese, but Suyoung Lee sings this song in Korean.
The reason why it is memorable is that the music video is a beautiful animation.
The beautiful rhythm matches the fantastic video well.
When I was dating my wife, I made a music video with captions that included a love letter.
I bought a bunch of flowers too.
I gave her the flowers first and then showed her the video when the sun was setting on Seonyu Island.
I could see how happy she was. Ah.. I want to see that music video right now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, MK!
I tried searching for the music video of 'Suteki da ne,' and the one I saw was an animation with characters from Final Fantasy. I don't know if it's the same music video you mentioned, but I can say that the video made me appreciate the song more. Even though I cannot understand Japanese, the video made me see that it's about love and longing.
- T. Caitlyn
I tend not to watch music videos. But I have a memorable music video in my life.
>> CORRECT
It is called "How much I like," but the original title is "Suteki da ne."
It is called "How much I like," but the original title is "Suteki da ne."
>> CORRECT
The original song is Japanese, but Suyoung Lee sings this song in Korean.
The original song is Japanese, but Suyoung Lee sings this song in Korean.
>> CORRECT
The reason why it is memorable is that the music video is a beautiful animation.
The reason why it is memorable is that the music video is a beautiful animation.
>> CORRECT
The beautiful rhythm matches the fantastic video well.
The beautiful rhythm matches the fantastic video well.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: The beautiful rhythm matches the fantastic video perfectly.
When I was dating my wife, I made a music video with captions that included a love letter.
When I was dating my wife, I made a music video with captions that included a love letter.
>> CORRECT
I bought a bunch of flowers too.
I bought a bunch of flowers too.
>> CORRECT
I gave her the flowers first and then showed her the video when the sun was setting on Seonyu Island.
I gave her the flowers first and then showed her the video when the sun was setting on Seonyu Island.
>> CORRECT
I could see how happy she was.
I could see how happy she was.
>> CORRECT
Ah.. I want to see that music video right now.
>> CORRECT
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