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What are the best ways to avoid getting sick?

현무/2024-07-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
i think Sufficient sleep and food , regular exercise , The most important is sleep . because new cells are created while you sleep, Those cells boost immunity.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey Kyle! Job well done on today's homework. You gave another long answer. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

i think Sufficient sleep and food , regular exercise , The most important is sleep . because new cells are created while you sleep, Those cells boost immunity.
>> I think sufficient sleep, regular exercise, and proper nutrition are crucial, with sleep being the most important. New cells are created during sleep, and these cells play a vital role in boosting immunity.
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