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The illusion of graduation

임성준/2024-07-02

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
What have you learned from the article that you read? >>> This is my first time to study Ultrasound imaging so I learned unknown concepts and words in this area. I also knew that many science techniques were emerged in the world. Finally I acknowledge that despite graduation of colleage, I don't know anything... There are too many things that I did not know yet and I have to study. However there is only way upward for me!
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Brian! That's great to hear you're diving into new concepts and techniques! It's completely normal to feel like there's so much to learn, especially in a field as vast as ultrasound imaging. Your determination to keep moving forward is inspiring. Remember, every step you take is a step closer to mastering it all!
~ Teacher Maxine

This is my first time to study Ultrasound imaging so I learned unknown concepts and words in this area. 
>> This is my first time studying ultrasound imaging, so I've learned new concepts and words in this area.

I also knew that many science techniques were emerged in the world. 
>> I also learned that many scientific techniques have emerged in the world.

Finally I acknowledge that despite graduation of colleage, I don't know anything... 
>> Finally, I acknowledge that despite graduating from college, I feel like I don't know anything...

There are too many things that I did not know yet and I have to study. 
>> There are still many things that I do not know yet and need to study.

However there is only way upward for me!
>> However, there is only one way upward for me!
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