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"Every cloud has a silver lining" is a popular old saying. Does this apply to your life?
이지윤/2024-07-01
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
No one else knows, but I believe every cloud has a silver lining and I think it applies to our lives as well.
However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before out eyes.
I think we can meet early by working hard with hope, or we can meet a little late while doing our own work silently.
Also, because there is a word miracle, I think people can meet silver lining like a miracle in their life.
To be honest, living without any hope is like walking on a limitless dark path that has no end and will be hard to endure hard work and pain.
I also remember these words when things don't work out, when something upset happens, and prepare for the next step to meet my silver lining that I will meet someday.
If we continue to prepare, won't my sliver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet silver lining someday?
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Yun!~
In that idiomatic phrase, the "silver lining" represents hope in an otherwise terrible circumstance. I also agree that we should put it into practice in our daily lives. Silver Lining gives us motivation to keep going even in the face of obstacles. :))
Chammy
No one else knows, but I believe every cloud has a silver lining and I think it applies to our lives as well.
>> Correct
However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before out eyes.
However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before out eyes.
>>However, most people don't know where the silver lining is or when it will be seen before our eyes.
I think we can meet early by working hard with hope, or we can meet a little late while doing our own work silently.
Also, because there is a word miracle, I think people can meet silver lining like a miracle in their life.
To be honest, living without any hope is like walking on a limitless dark path that has no end and will be hard to endure hard work and pain.
I also remember these words when things don't work out when something upset happens, and prepare for the next step to meet my silver lining that I will meet someday.
Also, because there is a word miracle, I think people can meet silver lining like a miracle in their life.
To be honest, living without any hope is like walking on a limitless dark path that has no end and will be hard to endure hard work and pain.
I also remember these words when things don't work out when something upset happens, and prepare for the next step to meet my silver lining that I will meet someday.
>> Correct
If we continue to prepare, won't my sliver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet silver lining someday?
If we continue to prepare, won't my sliver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet silver lining someday?
>> If we continue to prepare, won't my silver lining shine more brilliantly when we meet the silver lining someday?
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>> When we encounter the silver lining eventually, won't my silver lining shine even brighter if we keep preparing?
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