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What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the countryside?

신봉규/2024-07-01

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I think that the advantages of living in the countryside are being able to live in nature. the disadvantages of living in the countryside are that there are no convienient facilities such as the subway and the theater.
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Hey Bong Kyu! Thank you for answering the homework. Great job for making long sentences! Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I think that the advantages of living in the countryside are being able to live in nature.
>> I think that the advantages of living in the countryside include being able to live in nature. 

the disadvantages of living in the countryside are that there are no convienient facilities such as the subway and the theater.
>> The disadvantages of living in the countryside are that there are no convenient facilities such as subways and theaters.
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