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How do you avoid arguments?

김영경/2024-06-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Above all, I keep the mouth shut when I get cross because I have come to know that there hasn’t been any benefits to say a word in a bad mood for me and counterparts. However, if I am to counter or respond, I prefer texting my intentions to speaking them because I can be more discreet or self-controlled when I text. Argument can develop when there is misunderstand between the parties. So if we can try to avoid it through wise and careful ways, we can resolve it before it ends up quarrel. If I get mired in argument, I often consult with close friends to reflect myself on him. Sometime I ran amok from misunderstanding. Fortunately, I have some friends who are wise enough to let me know what I did wrong without offending me, guiding me to issue an apology to counterparts. I wish I could be a person to them when they need some wise man to help them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Steve!

Keeping quiet when you're upset is wise, as it prevents unnecessary conflict. Texting allows for more control and discretion. Arguments often stem from misunderstandings, so careful communication can help avoid them. I admire your way of thinking. That is difficult, yet you know how to handle them.

~ Teacher Trixia

Content:

Above all, I keep the mouth shut when I get cross because I have come to know that there hasn’t been any benefits to say a word in a bad mood for me and counterparts.

- Above all, I keep my mouth shut when I get cross because I have come to know that there haven’t been any benefits to saying a word in a bad mood for me and my counterparts.

However, if I am to counter or respond, I prefer texting my intentions to speaking them because I can be more discreet or self-controlled when I text.

- However, if I am to counter or respond, I prefer texting my intentions to speaking them because I can be more discreet or self-controlled when I text.

Argument can develop when there is misunderstand between the parties.

- An argument can develop when there is a misunderstanding between the parties.

So if we can try to avoid it through wise and careful ways, we can resolve it before it ends up quarrel.

If I get mired in argument, I often consult with close friends to reflect myself on him.

- So if we can try to avoid it in wise and careful ways, we can resolve it before it ends up in a quarrel.

If I get mired in arguments, I often consult with close friends to reflect on myself.

Sometime I ran amok from misunderstanding.

- Sometimes I ran away from misunderstandings.

Fortunately, I have some friends who are wise enough to let me know what I did wrong without offending me, guiding me to issue an apology to counterparts.

- Fortunately, I have some friends who are wise enough to let me know what I did wrong without offending me, guiding me to issue an apology to my counterparts.

I wish I could be a person to them when they need some wise man to help them.

- CORRECT.