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김지숙/2024-06-25

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I want to cut a lot of hair because if I cut it a lot, it will be cool even on a hot day and I think I'll wash my hair soon.

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Hi Oh Shin Woo!

Thank you and have a great day ^^

I want to cut a lot of hair because if I cut it a lot, it will be cool even on a hot day and I think I'll wash my hair soon.

>> I want to have a haircut because if I cut it short, it will feel cool even on a hot day and I think I'll wash my hair soon.