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I want to know these sentences are grammatically correct or not!

강민아/2024-06-23

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You’re at home when the floor begins moving back and forth. The shaking lasts for several seconds. You’re in an earthquake. Many experts call earthquakes dangerous and scaring. They kill and injure people and also destroy buildings. Many experts call earthquakes dangerous and scaring. < I want to know Especially this sentence is grammatically right or wrong! Once the earthquake ends, you could see many people injured around you. < I want to check whether This sentence is right. Once the earthquake ends, you could see many people injure around you. < and This should be wring.

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Hi Mina!^^

Welcome back. Here's my correction.

Andrea

You’re at home when the floor begins moving back and forth..

>> Correct

The shaking lasts for several seconds.

>> Correct

You’re in an earthquake.

>> You’re in an earthquake zone.

Many experts call earthquakes dangerous and scaring.

>> Many experts say that earthquake is dangerous and scary.

They kill and injure people and also destroy buildings.

>> It kills and injures people and it also destroys buildings.

Many experts call earthquakes dangerous and scaring. < I want to know Especially this sentence is grammatically right or wrong!

>> we need to use adjectives, therefore, the word should be scary.

Once the earthquake ends, you could see many people injured around you. < I want to check whether This sentence is right.

>> Once the earthquake is over, you might see many people around you who are injured.

Once the earthquake ends, you could see many people injure around you. < and This should be wring.

>> `After the earthquake, you may observe many people injured around you.