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Are you a helpful person? Explain your answer.

차유진/2024-06-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I'm a helpful person. For example I help a new friend, I tell the structure of the school for a new friend. I like helping people (o’∀`)♪
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Yale!

Here's your edited essay. Please take a look at the minor corrections and alternative expressions below, such as "I don't mind" which can be an alternative to "I like".  


Cheers,
Jean~~



                        
                     Are you a helpful person? Explain your answer.


Yes, I'm a helpful person.
>> OR: Yes, I am. 

For example I help a new friend, I tell the structure of the school for a new friend.
>> For example, I helped a new friend by telling the structure of the school to him/her.

I like helping people. 
>> OR: I don't mind helping people. 

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