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Make sentences using the words below:

차유진/2024-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
1. asking: I have a asking for my mom. 2. needing: If you have a needing whenever talk to me. 3. colleague or colleagues: He is my dad's colleague. 4. these: These are strangers. 5. them: I believe them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Yale!

Here's your edited essay. Please take a look at the corrections and alternative expressions given below, such as "coworker" which can be an alternative to "colleague". See you soon! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                        

                        Make sentences using the words below:


1. asking: I have a asking for my mom.
>> I'm asking my mom. 

2. needing: If you have a needing whenever talk to me.
>> If you need anything, you can talk to me anytime. 

3. colleague or colleagues: He is my dad's colleague.
>> OR: He's my dad's coworker. 

4. these: These are strangers.
>> OR: They are unfamiliar people. 

5. them: I believe them.
>> CORRECT~~

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