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Fix the relationship with my friend

양기연/2024-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I would be willing to see her again if the friend contacted me to say hello and apologized for cutting off our relationship. But I think it will be difficult to have a good relationship like before again. There is a Korean saying , "a broken dish can't be completely fixed ". As the saying goes, I think that it is not easy to recover once broken trust.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I couldn't agree more! Once a relationship is broken or there is a gap, there is no way to bring it back to what it was before.

- T. Caitlyn

I would be willing to see her again if the friend contacted me to say hello and apologized for cutting off our relationship.

>> CORRECT

But I think it will be difficult to have a good relationship like before again.

>> CORRECT

There is a Korean saying, "A broken dish can't be completely fixed ".

>> CORRECT

As the saying goes, I think that it is not easy to recover once broken trust.

>> As the saying goes, I think that it is not easy to recover trust once it's broken.