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김순님/2024-06-20

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My father didn't let me watch animation when I was child. I had decided to watch it if I grew up. But I haven't done. Only I am doing since I was a child is chatting with my friends.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Ms. Sunny!
well, don't feel bad if you have certain things about your childhood. We all have issues anyway, maybe because our parents grew up to be poor and they think that doing such a thing is already a luxury for us. 
Enjoy the day and the moment you have!
Aki~


My father didn't let me watch animation when I was child.
>>> My father didn't let me watch animation when I was a child.

I had decided to watch it if I grew up.
>>> CORRECT!

But I haven't done.
>>> But I haven't done it. 
>>> But I never did it.

Only I am doing since I was a child is chatting with my friends.
>>> What I did was chat with my friends when I was young.
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