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정일환/2024-06-19

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Q : What are your short term and long term goals? A : My short-term goal is to become fluent in English and my long-term goal is to get a job at a foreign company.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Steve! That's a great plan! Becoming fluent in English will definitely open up a lot of opportunities for you.
~ Teacher Maxine

My short-term goal is to become fluent in English and my long-term goal is to get a job at a foreign company.
>> CORRECT!
OR > In the short term, I aim to achieve fluency in English, while in the long term, I aspire to secure a position at a foreign company.
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