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How do you think Koreans can reduce food waste?

김명기/2024-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think we should hesitate to buy a lot of food. Generally, there is a lot of food in the refrigerator. If we have a lot of food, we should share it. If possible, we should eat the food from the refrigerator. It takes a lot of energy to store a lot of food, and its nutritional value decreases over time. People's thinking should change. If they want to eat something, they can buy it, but it would be better to make meals from the food in the refrigerator. Being satisfied with what we have is helpful in reducing food waste.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

I totally agree with you, and I have to admit, I am also guilty of buying or ordering food even when there is still food left in the refrigerator. I think we should really discipline ourselves and, as you've said, be satisfied or content with what we already have.

- T. Caitlyn

I think we should hesitate to buy a lot of food.

>> CORRECT
Generally, there is a lot of food in the refrigerator.

>> CORRECT
If we have a lot of food, we should share it.

>> CORRECT
If possible, we should eat the food from the refrigerator.

>> CORRECT
It takes a lot of energy to store a lot of food, and its nutritional value decreases over time.

>> CORRECT
People's thinking should change.

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If they want to eat something, they can buy it, but it would be better to make meals from the food in the refrigerator.

>> CORRECT
Being satisfied with what we have is helpful in reducing food waste.

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