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What sport would you want to try or learn? Explain your answer.

차진혁/2024-06-18

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I want to play the Boxing because it is famous in every country. And I want to learn swimming because I like water. Also I want to learn Muay Thai because it is very cool.

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Good evening there, Jimmy!

I'm sending you back your revised composition. Please go over the revisions written below, such as putting a comma after the word "also". Good night!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What sport would you want to try or learn? Explain your answer.

I want to play the Boxing because it is famous in every country.

>> I want to try boxing because it is famous in every country.

And I want to learn swimming because I like water.

>> And I want to learn how to swim because I like water.

Also I want to learn Muay Thai because it is very cool.

>> Also, I want to learn Muay Thai because it is very cool.