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What do you think is the most fun musical instrument to play? Why?

차유진/2024-06-18

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I think the most fun musical instrument is guita because it's easy to learn, sounds good and guitar player is so nice. I want to play the guitar very well. d=(^o^)=b
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Good evening, Yale!

Here's your corected essay. Please go through the corrections and alternative expressions given below, such as "I hope" which can be an alternative to "I want". Good night and see you tomorrow! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                        What do you think is the most fun musical instrument to play? Why?


I think the most fun musical instrument is guita because it's easy to learn, sounds good and guitar player is so nice.
>> I think the most fun musical instrument is the guitar because it is easy to learn, sounds good, and the guitar player looks cool. 

I want to play the guitar very well. 
>> OR: I hope to play the guitar superbly. 
>> OR: I hope to be a superb guitar player. 

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