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Which place in Korea is the best place for a spring vacation? Why?

이진태/2024-06-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When the spring is come, a flower is famous in Korea, especially in April. So, I recommend you should go to the famous flower spot in the spring season. In Seoul, there are some flower spot. but, Yeouio-do is most famous spot. you can see the many flowers with big river.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Jt! That sounds like an awesome place for spring vacation. Thank you for recommending it and sharing why this is an awesome place.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

When the spring is come, a flower is famous in Korea, especially in April.
>> When spring comes, a particular flower becomes famous in Korea, especially in April.

So, I recommend you should go to the famous flower spot in the spring season.
>> So, I recommend visiting popular flower spots during the spring season. 

In Seoul, there are some flower spot. but, Yeouio-do is most famous spot. you can see the many flowers with big river.
>> In Seoul, there are several flower spots, but Yeouido is the most famous one. You can see many flowers along with a big river.
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