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If you could change one thing in the world, what would it be?

이진태/2024-06-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I could change one thing, I would change about education system. The education can change future. so it's important factor. I want to change the education fee will be free. If someone want to learn something, it should be a free to learn.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! I think that would be a great idea too. This can help more people get good education for their future.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If I could change one thing, I would change about education system.
>> If I could change one thing, I would change the education system. 

The education can change future. so it's important factor.
>> Education can change the future, so it's an important factor. 

I want to change the education fee will be free.
>> I want to make education free.

If someone want to learn something, it should be a free to learn.
>>If someone wants to learn something, it should be free to learn.
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