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Have you ever tried complaining at a restaurant? Why?

김명기/2024-06-14

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I remember about 2 experiences. The first one was so long ago. I was eating tasty rib soup, but I found a cockroach in the soup. So I told the restaurant owner and I received a new rib soup and ate it again. The second one was a recent thing. I ordered Bossam in a very big size. But the amount was not very big, so I ordered the very big size Bossam again. After it was delivered, I compared their sizes. They were totally different. So I called the restaurant and got a refund for the difference between the small menu and the very big menu.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, MK!

You did great in sharing your experiences at restaurants. Your experiences with food and your reactions to them are relatable, and your assertive actions show how good you are at solving issues or problems.

- T. Caitlyn

I remember about 2 experiences.

>> I remember two experiences.
The first one was so long ago.

>> CORRECT
I was eating tasty rib soup, but I found a cockroach in the soup.

>> CORRECT
So I told the restaurant owner and I received a new rib soup and ate it again.

>> So I told the restaurant owner, and I received a new bowl of rib soup and ate it again.
The second one was a recent thing.

>> CORRECT

I ordered Bossam in a very big size.

>> I ordered Bossam in a large size.
But the amount was not very big, so I ordered the very big size Bossam again.

>> But the portion was not very big, so I ordered the large size Bossam again.
After it was delivered, I compared their sizes.

>> CORRECT

They were totally different.

>> CORRECT
So I called the restaurant and got a refund for the difference between the small menu and the very big menu.

>> CORRECT