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What are the marriage customs in your country?

김일환/2024-06-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Wedding guests give money to the groom and bride. Amount of money depends on how much close guests are to them. If a guest goes to the wedding and is not close to them, the guest gives about 50 dallors. If the guest brings someone to the wedding, the guest gives about 100 dallors, because of meal cost. If the guest is close to them, pays 100 dallors. (Maybe they work at the same place.) If the guest is friend with groom or bride, the guest pays 200 dallors or more. So receiving a wedding invitation isn't always good.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Wow! nicely done, Hwanny! Thank you for making time on answering this. See you in class!
- Teacher Angela

Wedding guests give money to the groom and bride. 
>> CORRECT

Amount of money depends on how much close guests are to them. 
>> The amount of money depends on how close guests are to them.

If a guest goes to the wedding and is not close to them, the guest gives about 50 dallors. 
>> If a guest attends the wedding but is not close to them, the guest gives about $50.

If the guest brings someone to the wedding, the guest gives about 100 dallors, because of meal cost. 
>>If the guest brings someone to the wedding, they give about $100, to cover the meal cost.

If the guest is close to them, pays 100 dallors. (Maybe they work at the same place.)
>> If the guest is close to them (maybe they work at the same place), they pay $100.

If the guest is friend with groom or bride, the guest pays 200 dallors or more. 
>> If the guest is a friend of the groom or bride, they pay $200 or more.

So receiving a wedding invitation isn't always good
>> So receiving a wedding invitation isn't always a positive thing.
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